LIQUID....THOUGHTS!!

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Liquid thoughts
Coming out of mind
Trying to take a mould
To present themselves to the world

Me in a vigorous exercise

To cut them precise
To make them pristine
To hold them proper
Trying endlessly to tweak them

Never confident of …
Letting them go…
Freely….as a flow

Afraid of world catching…
The weirdness of my thoughts!

 (For One Single Impression, Prompt:LIQUID)



Comments

Harshad Mehta said…
This is a process of thoughts solidifying! Well written.
April 28, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Anonymous said…
I have read a number of your poems and this is the first time I been able to comment, I just haven't been able to quite figure out the page layout lol You are extremely talented! I am with you on the weird thoughts
April 28, 2013 at 7:08 PM
PT said…
thanks buddy for the appreciation
April 28, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Mary said…
Thanks for taking part in Poetry Pantry. I do like the idea of liquid thoughts....sometimes we just don't know how / where they will flow.
April 28, 2013 at 7:27 PM
WabiSabi said…
This sounds like the poetic process! Weird or not, I say let those liquid thoughts flow onto the paper!!Even the Breeze
April 28, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Maggie Grace said…
I thought too it was the expression of the creative process in your mind. Very original. Fear of judgment. Think we all have that. So glad you let this one go as it was meant to be.
April 28, 2013 at 10:18 PM
hyperCRYPTICal said…
Liquid thoughts so easily disappear unless we capture them in the written word.

I understand about weird thoughts and some I definitely would not pen on paper!

Anna :o]
April 28, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Yes, let them flow. We're a friendly bunch (smiles).
April 28, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Stormcat Poetry said…
"Afraid of world catching…
The weirdness of my thoughts!"
Says so well the fear that makes poets timid. I too recently joined poets united and you can rest easy this is a lovely place to post. Don't have to worry about weirdness I believe we all relate because we are all quite unique here but share the common trait of felling compelled to express ourselves through poetry.
April 29, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Gillena Cox said…
nice write

much love...
May 6, 2013 at 5:35 AM
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