You Are My Time......





They say times just fly

With you it becomes stand still

Each second getting etched into….

A memorial moment



I look at all those moments

All fresh…. frozen just like Swiss Alps in winter

Gliding through them…up and down


I relive my life…every time

Every time when I remember you

The times at which you are with me


Slowly you became with to within…



Yes for everyone else…probably time just fly

But for me …it stands still

With you…or…without you



Because you are my time

My life’s needle struck ….only and only with you!


(For Poets United Poetry pantry #230)

Comments

Vandana Sharma said…
What strong herat frlt emotions, loved it!
Arpita Dash said…
I love this poetry, nicely penned....
Mary said…
I love the moments when time just stands still & you appreciate each and every moment to the fullest. I like especially your last two lines & the idea of "only and only with you."
humbird said…
'My life’s needle struck' ~ at least you enjoy it....
Björn Rudberg said…
The images of time standing still and the needle struck are extremely strong I think.. wonderful words.
you captured the aching ecstasy of love.
Strong emotions here and loved the shift, 'Slowly you became with to within…' a wonderful moment when it happens.
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I can feel time standing still, when the one you love is not present. The shift from being with to being with within is eloquent.
C.C. said…
There are those moments in time that are so special to us that we wish for that needle to get stuck, so that we could savor it a bit longer, you know?
Susan said…
Eerie, obsessive ... and yet sympathetic. I would tell her to unwrap herself from the time a little, to break loose. But who am I to talk? I know exactly what you are talking about.
ps said…
lines comming from heart with intelligence,ur really good.congrates
PT said…
Inspired by your beautiful images in deed!
Nataša Dolenc said…
lovely captured! so true.

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