You Are My Time......

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They say times just fly

With you it becomes stand still

Each second getting etched into….

A memorial moment



I look at all those moments

All fresh…. frozen just like Swiss Alps in winter

Gliding through them…up and down


I relive my life…every time

Every time when I remember you

The times at which you are with me


Slowly you became with to within…



Yes for everyone else…probably time just fly

But for me …it stands still

With you…or…without you



Because you are my time

My life’s needle struck ….only and only with you!


(For Poets United Poetry pantry #230)

Comments

Vandana Sharma said…
What strong herat frlt emotions, loved it!
December 7, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Arpita Dash said…
I love this poetry, nicely penned....
December 7, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Mary said…
I love the moments when time just stands still & you appreciate each and every moment to the fullest. I like especially your last two lines & the idea of "only and only with you."
December 7, 2014 at 7:31 PM
humbird said…
'My life’s needle struck' ~ at least you enjoy it....
December 7, 2014 at 8:16 PM
brudberg said…
The images of time standing still and the needle struck are extremely strong I think.. wonderful words.
December 7, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Abin Chakraborty said…
you captured the aching ecstasy of love.
December 7, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Donna@LivingFromHappiness said…
Strong emotions here and loved the shift, 'Slowly you became with to within…' a wonderful moment when it happens.
December 7, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I can feel time standing still, when the one you love is not present. The shift from being with to being with within is eloquent.
December 8, 2014 at 4:31 AM
C.C. said…
There are those moments in time that are so special to us that we wish for that needle to get stuck, so that we could savor it a bit longer, you know?
December 8, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Susan said…
Eerie, obsessive ... and yet sympathetic. I would tell her to unwrap herself from the time a little, to break loose. But who am I to talk? I know exactly what you are talking about.
December 8, 2014 at 8:57 AM
ps said…
lines comming from heart with intelligence,ur really good.congrates
December 8, 2014 at 10:08 AM
PT said…
Inspired by your beautiful images in deed!
December 8, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Natašek said…
lovely captured! so true.
December 8, 2014 at 1:59 PM
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