(Image taken from Goole)

Words through my verse
storming into the world
searching for identity!


Leo said…
That's quite true.. storm of words do search for meaning and identity... nicely said.

Pt, a haiku has a maximum of seventeen syllables (pronunciation sounds), and this exceeds that. goes 5-8-8 to a total of 21 :) please correct. for e.g. the word identity has 4 syllables because we pronounce it as i-den-ti-ty
PT said…
made little it O.K now?
Leo said…
Yeah. Beautiful :)

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