SAPTAPADI....Seven Steps!

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Seven steps around the fire
Two souls unite for lifetime

Living all their dreams
Sharing all their virtues
Two hearts beat in sync


Bearing all the good and bad
Holding the hands together
Cross the sea of life as one


Becoming one from two and
Two bonding... till death do apart
   
They say marriages are made in heaven
I say they are built on trust and faith



Poets United Midweek Motif ~  Seventh

 

 

Comments

Yogi Saraswat said…
They say marriages are made in heaven
I say they are built on trust and faith
Exactly
January 8, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said…
The beginning of a great adventure!
January 8, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Mary said…
I agree with you, about trust & faith......as well as work! Well expressed.
January 8, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Susan said…
The circling and the fire helps the bonding, I am sure, as the meanings of trust and faith move into earthly words! Love this.
January 9, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
This is very beautiful - the poem, and the ceremony with which they pledge their vows. I LOVE the closing line! So true.
January 9, 2015 at 4:24 AM
Jae Rose said…
I think that would make for a healthy marriage..great write and philosophical thought
January 10, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Gen Giggles said…
Great ending to the poem. Wonderful thought on life.
January 10, 2015 at 7:58 PM
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