Trying to define you...




Echoing the state of mind

Thoughts take the silent route

When whispers too can’t whim

Heart blinks at the sight of love



We are a way too far off …from each other…

Trying to read the absconding words

Sight becomes meek

Sound tries to sneak



I try to catapult the scene

With the memory of yours

Mind sinks… heart floats

Trying to ejaculate you from me …



Trying to hold the eternal feel

Souls synchronize in the mute world

Though we are miles apart

(For Poets United: Poetry Pantry#243)


Comments

Mary said…
The idea of souls synchronizing intrigues me!
Wolfsrosebud said…
felt the longing in this
Jae Rose said…
Absconding words seem the worse loss to me...it helps us define each other i suppose
Vandana Sharma said…
Miles apart....................but always close to heart:)
scotthastiepoet said…
Strong stuff here - a provoking read, which os always good "Trying to ejaculate you from me …" Spectacular!c I will dwell on that for a while... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
Sumana Roy said…
"Souls synchronize"...this is uplifting and comforting...
Björn Rudberg said…
It's amazing how heart beats can synchronize across the distant lands
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I like "heart blinks at the sight of love". It always is astonishing, when love arrives.
R.K. Garon said…
Interesting... and wonderfully expressed.
ZQ
totomai said…
long distance relationships are the hardest. but at the end of the day, your love will triump
hyperCRYPTICal said…
Sometimes love isn't enough, sometimes far too much.
Anna :o]
Old Egg said…
How much more intense is our love when parted from the object of our desire as we desperately cling onto memories.
C.C. said…
"absconding" is such a great word and it works so well here :-)
Loco mente said…
Miles apart, yes...
But may the souls connect...
Boundless love - nice!

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