Trying to define you...

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Echoing the state of mind

Thoughts take the silent route

When whispers too can’t whim

Heart blinks at the sight of love



We are a way too far off …from each other…

Trying to read the absconding words

Sight becomes meek

Sound tries to sneak



I try to catapult the scene

With the memory of yours

Mind sinks… heart floats

Trying to ejaculate you from me …



Trying to hold the eternal feel

Souls synchronize in the mute world

Though we are miles apart

(For Poets United: Poetry Pantry#243)


Comments

Mary said…
The idea of souls synchronizing intrigues me!
March 15, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Wolfsrosebud said…
felt the longing in this
March 15, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Jae Rose said…
Absconding words seem the worse loss to me...it helps us define each other i suppose
March 15, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Vandana Sharma said…
Miles apart....................but always close to heart:)
March 15, 2015 at 6:34 PM
scotthastiepoet said…
Strong stuff here - a provoking read, which os always good "Trying to ejaculate you from me …" Spectacular!c I will dwell on that for a while... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
March 15, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Sumana Roy said…
"Souls synchronize"...this is uplifting and comforting...
March 15, 2015 at 9:13 PM
brudberg said…
It's amazing how heart beats can synchronize across the distant lands
March 15, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I like "heart blinks at the sight of love". It always is astonishing, when love arrives.
March 16, 2015 at 12:33 AM
ZQ said…
Interesting... and wonderfully expressed.
ZQ
March 16, 2015 at 2:22 AM
totomai said…
long distance relationships are the hardest. but at the end of the day, your love will triump
March 16, 2015 at 4:28 AM
hyperCRYPTICal said…
Sometimes love isn't enough, sometimes far too much.
Anna :o]
March 16, 2015 at 6:48 AM
Old Egg said…
How much more intense is our love when parted from the object of our desire as we desperately cling onto memories.
March 16, 2015 at 11:26 AM
C.C. said…
"absconding" is such a great word and it works so well here :-)
March 17, 2015 at 5:30 AM
Locomente said…
Miles apart, yes...
But may the souls connect...
Boundless love - nice!
March 17, 2015 at 3:48 PM
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