Everyone is a champ.....

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Swimming in the pool of thoughts
Mind will never rest
From one to another
From another to another
Thoughts are like snow fed rivers
Never get drained out

Life moves ahead
Swimming against all odds
Taking the lessons from time
You reach the goal
Every one is a champ here

Swimming is nothing but a way of life
Swimming is nothing but rising above the waters
Some take it slow some move swiftly
Some gets it easy some goes through rough
All swimmers end at only one end
Sooner or later everyone is a winner!

For Poets United: Midweek Motif:Swimming

Comments

Unknown said…
A life lesson really - it is good to go at your own pace in that and in the pool.
November 12, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Susan said…
I really like how you put this truth in the image of pools and rivers, in the idea of a race that everyone wins at his and her own pace. The repetition of "Swimming" works here as it had me counting off all the people winning, swimming, living.
November 13, 2014 at 12:13 AM
totomai said…
indeed ~ there's no loser as we all swim through this life.
November 13, 2014 at 4:17 AM
humbird said…
Love the optimistic end- all winners!
November 13, 2014 at 4:46 AM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I most love "Thoughts are like snow fed rivers/Never get drained out". Great metaphor for life. We all have the same finish line!
November 13, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Sumana Roy said…
every line of this poem is inspirational...love to think that everyone is a winner in this life in his or her own way...wonderful.
November 13, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Panchali said…
Inspiring piece!! ... ... we free ourselves from the shackles of whatever is going on in our lives. We swim through...Perfect!
November 13, 2014 at 6:59 PM
Gen Giggles said…
Yes, we are all swimmers in this world.
November 14, 2014 at 8:34 AM
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