Passion...A Haiku!

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Words gather passionately

Clasp each other.....

Delivering a poem!

 

 

(For Poets United: Verse First ~ Passion)

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Mary said…
I deleted one duplicate comment and they both disappeared. I can't scroll up again to look at your poem or I won't get back in the comment box again. Please change all of those options at the right. I don't want to see archives, page views, popular posts, and I don't want to subscribe. I only want to comment, which is proving to be exceedingly difficult.. I did enjoy your poem and its message.
March 28, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Unknown said…
Words do express passion well
delightful haiku
March 28, 2013 at 11:00 PM
Unknown said…
What a terrific representation of creation. Lovely.
March 29, 2013 at 2:57 AM
Scarlet said…
Like the tercet (strictly not a haiku form) ~ Enjoyed this ~
March 29, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Ella said…
Ah, clever
I like your passion ;D
March 29, 2013 at 8:16 AM
PT said…
Hey...Mary
its nice that you are so determined to comment
but there is absolutely no problem to do that...as u suggested I checked out
don't go to side bar
just click on the comments...the comment window will open ...you can write and publish
hope you get it right
March 29, 2013 at 9:59 AM
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