Weak??

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I shed tears...

I love people

I feel…. I emote


They say I am weak!



Tears...cleanse me

I shed all the unwanted

I keep the entire essential

Crying purifies my soul

Makes me flawless



Love …immerse me

I lose all the sense of self

I gain all the humility

Loving stretches my zeal

Makes me wholesome


Feel …elevates me

I drop all the inhibitions

I take all the reverence

Feeling enhances my ardor

Makes me amiable



Emotions...express me

I lose all the ordinals

I earn all the innate

Emotions enthrall my spirit

Makes me perfect



Though I appear weak

Tears…love

Feelings…emotions

They are the ones…

Which makes me strong


As a person…

As a human!!




((For One Single Impression, Prompt:WEAK

Comments

Anonymous said…
true
May 27, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Vandana Sharma said…
I think such kind of person is the strongest of all , who is filled with emotions:)
May 27, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Brian Miller said…
as a human...nice closure
and i like the humility that love brings...
May 27, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Harshad Mehta said…
Oh yes, tears wash away inner dirt and makes one clean.
May 27, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Anand S Unni said…
Great writing. Emotional and precise. :)
June 2, 2013 at 12:44 PM
aka_andrea said…
feel...elevates me

I like that a lot. I think when I am expressing emotion I am at my most alive. you expressed this feeling well.
June 2, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Mary said…
I admire people who are not afraid to share their emotions. This is a wonderfully open and human piece.

Thanks for posting a link weekly in Poetry Pantry. I hope you will be able to make visits as well, as we all enjoy them and it keeps up the morale for all.
June 2, 2013 at 4:55 PM
J Cosmo Newbery said…
It's emotions that make us human. We should celebrate them.
June 2, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP) said…
This is a celebration of emotion - the coalescence of which is part (I a agree) of the essence of being human :)
June 2, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Anonymous said…
Pride in our most human expression! Nicely done.
June 2, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Anonymous said…
Self-searching and realization, I like it!
June 2, 2013 at 10:05 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
YES! That is what I was thinking all through the poem - it is a strong person, not a weak one, who isnt afraid of the tears, the emotions. Love the ending: "which makes me strong as a person, as a human." Perfect!
June 2, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Anonymous said…
I enjoyed your piece. thx for sharing.
June 3, 2013 at 1:53 AM
parentforward.blogspot.com said…
Hi, PT.
The last two verses are powerful and beautiful. Thanks.
June 3, 2013 at 4:56 AM
PT said…
What else can I say? Wow....
June 3, 2013 at 1:07 PM
slow learner said…
very well said.
August 28, 2013 at 2:41 PM
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