Let Go.....

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Never be so hurry in life
Pause…think…and let go
Things which you don’t like
Just let them all go

Time once spent
Life once burnt
Hardly recoverable
Better you take care
Remember the truth and proceed
Strive to achieve the concord

Let the bitterness go
Let the bluntness vanish
Let the wickedness go
Let the distress banish
Holding the ray of peace
Life must race ahead

Never know when it will break
Keep the strings attached
Life is so gentle…
Handle it with care….
Pause…think…and let the junk go
Keep only love at your core! 






(for Poetry Jam, prompt: Let Go)

Comments

Brian Miller said…
nice...i think we need more time to pause...and def a lot more letting go.....we carry so much weight in our lives it is a wonder some times that we can even continue to move....love is the answer....
March 26, 2014 at 7:37 PM
Laurie Kolp said…
Yes, life should be handled with care... and out with the junk.
March 26, 2014 at 10:56 PM
alan1704 said…
Yes it is important to lose the trash that so often clings. Great words with so much wisdom.
March 26, 2014 at 11:58 PM
Mary said…
Important to rid oneself of the junk as well. Yes, love at one's core is important.
March 27, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Now THAT is wonderful advice. I needed that! Thank you.
March 27, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Hope said…
perfect message! enjoyed your write! thank you!
March 27, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Sumana Roy said…
wise lines... Life is so gentle…
Handle it with care….'the line is beautiful and delicate...
March 27, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Wayne said…
Nicely done and thanks for sharing your words
March 28, 2014 at 1:34 AM
Kathe W. said…
yes- toss out what is irrelevant and pay attention to what is important.
March 28, 2014 at 5:17 AM
Wendy Bourke said…
"Pause…think…and let the junk go" - good advice ! ! ! We really do hang onto a lot of junk, don't we. Well said!
March 28, 2014 at 5:51 AM
Sarav said…
Really enjoyed your word choices here :-) Well written!
March 29, 2014 at 7:11 AM
Intelliblog said…
I enjoyed reading this, a well written poem!
April 1, 2014 at 11:46 AM
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